Forum Homepage > Activities and Events [+][2] > TO 2nd Anniversary - Share My TO Essay > A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)
Previous   1 2   Next  
  
  A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)
Nikflickz 0    Member   
2
24
Title Citizen
Level 2
Exp 24
Points 0
Gold 24
Reg 2009-10-01
From
Posts 1
Visits 22
Last Login 2010-05-10
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-01 11:51:48  
 
A Journey to a New World

part 1/2
 
I am a hero from another world. I was called fourth by a brave hero of Talisman World to join his life changing journey. I was honored for being in his team, and said to myself, I will be strong like him someday. SoulEater was the brave assassin who called me from the other world I was in. He trained me to become strong and taught me everything I need to know.
I spent everyday of my life training and scavenging with my master, SoulEater.  Not long, I felt something different. It’s like time stops when we are together. And I just realized I fell in love with my master. But few days after that, I had to go back to the other world. I told my master that I have to go, but I will soon be back.
It took me few months before I was able to return to Talisman World. I was really excited to see my master. But it was a shock when I saw him with some other girl. He told me he fell in love with a beautiful fairy. So I had to stay away from him, and I didn’t tell him about how I feel.
That day I told myself, I’m nothing. I’m a weakling. Nobody wants me because I don’t have power. After a few days, I was asked by the apothecary in sky village to meet up with Mr. Panda in bamboo forest. When I was 5meters away from bamboo forest, I heard Mr. Panda’s yelping in pain. I saw him wounded!  So I asked him what had happened. He told me he was attacked by poisonous snakes and that he needs my help. I can’t refuse someone in need, so I had to go to the forest and hunt for viper blood serums. And there I met new people and new friends. Blurem23 and xJuReiLx asked me to join their guild because they need new comrades. It lightened me up, ‘because somehow I realized, someone likes me although I’m weak. So I didn’t refuse and I joined their guild. We helped each other everyday and we were able to make a name for our guild.
Until one day, blurem23 and xJuReiLx had to go far from Talisman World and they had to give up their powers. I was told by blurem23 to take care of the guild and to promise him that it will win the castle no matter what happens. “Don’t let the flame die out.” And I was made the leader of LordsOfDeath. Everyone left because they know I’m not strong enough to run a guild. So I gave up and left the guild. I had to undergo more and harder training. I met a fairy named IceCreaM. She became my personal fairy and my guide.
At that time, I received a message from my master SoulEater. He told me that his fairy princess left him. So I had to comfort him and helped him move on. Months have passed; he confessed to me about how he feels. And so I told him my long kept feelings. That day, He became my knight in shining armor and I became his apple of the eye.
SoulEater introduced me to his friends, HanomaN, MonkeyFist, and LordPyro. They brought me to places I’ve never been before. LordPyro became really close to me. We had a really good team, me, IceCreaM, LordPyro, and SoulEater. But one day, SoulEater got sick. He had to leave until he gets well again. And IceCreaM had to leave the team too, and had to go somewhere else.
Many months have passed, SoulEater haven’t returned yet. My friends told me not to wait for him anymore. I insisted, and told them he will return no matter what. And the much awaited day came, wherein I lost all the hope left in me and knew for sure, that he will never come back. At that point, I thought everyone left me. But LordPyro made me feel that his presence is always there. We tried holding on to each other. He’s the only one I got. We helped each other in caves, we slay powerful monsters, and our names spread throughout the World of Talisman. We heard rumors about us. And we are known by many.
I and LordPyro decided to rebuild the guild LordsOfDeath. And we were able to find new and loyal members. The rumors about us became louder and louder each day. But there were people who hated us as well. They talk lies about us so other people will hate us and not join our guild.
 
 
 
Last Edit by : Nikflickz (2009-10-01 22:41:14)


 
   
 
 
Nikflickz   0    Member   
Citizen
24
Title Citizen
Level 2
Exp 24
Points 0
Gold 24
Reg 2009-10-01
From
Posts 1
Visits 22
Last Login 2010-05-10
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-01 11:53:06  
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

A Journey to a New World Part 2/2



               Days have passed, Lordpyro said, “The time has come, wherein we shall attack..” Then we heard a soft familiar voice saying, “I am with you..” and we looked back and were surprised to see who was it. It’s IceCreaM, she has returned! We fought on wars with all our might. But there’s no luck. I told LordPyro, “We can’t win with these equipments, not without T-POWER.” And he told me, “I know someone who could help us.” He introduced me to Loo’s Grave Keeper. He prefers not to tell his name. Loo’s grave keeper showed us purple glowing equipments and made a deal with us. He said, “Show me you deserve this power by training 55 heroes or slaying 6000 monsters in the monster-infested cave called “Spider Catacomb.” Since we don’t have enough power to slay six thousand deadly monsters we decided to choose to train 55 new heroes of Talisman World. We were able to train 110 of them and got our new purple equipments as promised. We were able to do all everything, but in our mind, there is always one thought, “Never get blinded by power”.
And the day of War came; only a few of us were there. We fought with all our hearts; we fought with one goal, to bring home victory.  I was standing in the middle of hundreds of heroes, and was ready to sacrifice my life. One fairy named Benehime came up to me and told me, “I will help you my friend, just trust in yourself”. I took a deep breath, used swift move and came near the tower and tried sealing it. I endured all the pain of stinging arrows, sharp daggers, deadly shovels, and flaming swords that hit me. I closed my eyes and said to myself, this might be my end.

Few minutes later, I heard voices, cheerful voices. And I opened my eyes, looked up the sky, and I saw a message flashing in the clouds. It was victory! LordsOfDeath is the new castle owner. I received messages saying “congratulations KilluaZaoldyeck!” and some haters told me “You won by luck kid, you’re pathetic.” And I just answered them, “It was half luck, the rest was pure genius.” ;)
That day I realized, it’s not the palace which I am proud of now. It’s the people who helped me take over the palace. I saw they were smiling and their eyes were saying “It was a good a fight.”
And that’s my Talisman Story, It hasn’t ended yet. It’s just starting to get more interesting. I will never forget those who became part of my life changing journey especially my bestfriend in the world, LordPyro. Love, Power, and Friends…that’s just about it.



ign: KilluaZaoldyeck
level: 66
server: All Stars
 
 
Last Edit by : Nikflickz (2009-10-01 22:40:48)


 
   
 
 
Nikflickz   0    Member   
Citizen
24
Title Citizen
Level 2
Exp 24
Points 0
Gold 24
Reg 2009-10-01
From
Posts 1
Visits 22
Last Login 2010-05-10
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-01 11:53:53  
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

 
 
Last Edit by : Nikflickz (2009-10-01 22:39:59)


 
   
 
 
SunnyGao   -2    Member   
Knight
298
Title Knight
Level 5
Exp 309
Points 0
Gold 298
Reg 2009-01-19
From China
Posts 5
Visits 155
Last Login 2010-07-22
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-09 01:41:14  
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)


Good story.....
 
 
 
   
 
 
SunnyGao   -2    Member   
Knight
298
Title Knight
Level 5
Exp 309
Points 0
Gold 298
Reg 2009-01-19
From China
Posts 5
Visits 155
Last Login 2010-07-22
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-09 01:46:27  
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

U are so beautiful
 
 
 
   
 
 
Lina   2    Supermod   
Earl
3782
Title Earl
Level 9
Exp 3804
Points 0
Gold 3782
Reg 2009-03-01
From China
Posts 42
Visits 559
Last Login 2010-07-28
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-09 01:46:56  
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Good job, this is a nice story and that's all of us like in game.
 
 
 
   
 
 
nedetheo   0    Member   
Squire
52
Title Squire
Level 3
Exp 52
Points 0
Gold 52
Reg 2009-09-30
From
Posts 1
Visits 30
Last Login 2010-06-22
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-09 08:52:26  
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

 nice :D look at mine too www.mcgameland.com/viewthread.jsp
 
 
 
   
 
 
gabrieloko   0    Member   
Apprentice Knight
134
Title Apprentice Knight
Level 4
Exp 134
Points 0
Gold 134
Reg 2009-10-08
From Brazil
Posts 6
Visits 30
Last Login 2010-07-12
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-09 13:07:55  
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

this is a nice story and that's all of us like in game. good luck
 
 
 
   
 
 
LordPyro   0    Member   
Squire
52
Title Squire
Level 3
Exp 52
Points 0
Gold 52
Reg 2009-09-30
From Serbia
Posts 2
Visits 33
Last Login 2010-06-12
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-12 10:27:32  
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

my baby 
 
 
 
   
  LordPyro  
iproute   0    Member   
Viscount
2670
Title Viscount
Level 8
Exp 2815
Points 0
Gold 2670
Reg 2009-09-30
From United States
Posts 31
Visits 648
Last Login 2010-07-29
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-12 18:33:38  
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Very elegant story. I enjoyed reading it!

iproute
Game: Talisman Online
Server: Sun and Moon
Guild: Synergy [Leader]
TO Essay Submission: A Fantasy Palace Tale
 
 
 
   
  Character: iproute <> Server: Sun and Moon <> Guild: Synergy [Leader] <>  
mohamed   0    Member   
Grand Knight
436
Title Grand Knight
Level 6
Exp 492
Points 0
Gold 436
Reg 2009-09-30
From Canada
Posts 102
Visits 44
Last Login 2009-11-25
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-13 06:26:39
Message Quote Reply   #10
 
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

can u marry me? sorry joking ur story great!!!
 
 
 
   
  char name MonsterKiller13---- server: Light In The Darkness guilid HeRO  
LordPyro   0    Member   
Squire
52
Title Squire
Level 3
Exp 52
Points 0
Gold 52
Reg 2009-09-30
From Serbia
Posts 2
Visits 33
Last Login 2010-06-12
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-13 07:54:34
Message Quote Reply   #11
 
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

mohamed  if you read her story you would realize something-and that something is me
 
 
 
   
  LordPyro  
Drake   0    Member   
Apprentice Knight
155
Title Apprentice Knight
Level 4
Exp 159
Points 0
Gold 155
Reg 2009-10-03
From Canada
Posts 19
Visits 62
Last Login 2009-12-13
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-13 10:42:40
Message Quote Reply   #12
 
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Very nice story Nikflickz!

It would be appreciate if you can take some minutes and read my essay like I read yours

http://www.mcgameland.com/viewthread.jsp?id=1442
 
 
 
   
  ShadowSinxX - LiD server My Essay : http://www.mcgameland.com/viewthread.jsp?id=1442  
kuruma   0    Member   
Squire
60
Title Squire
Level 3
Exp 60
Points 0
Gold 60
Reg 2009-09-30
From Brazil
Posts 1
Visits 23
Last Login 2010-07-21
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-13 11:33:28
Message Quote Reply   #13
 
 

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Lol's ... good history

and nice pic
 
 
 
   
  Char : Niki --"--"--"-- Server : Giant Tree  
Nikflickz   0    Member   
Citizen
24
Title Citizen
Level 2
Exp 24
Points 0
Gold 24
Reg 2009-10-01
From
Posts 1
Visits 22
Last Login 2010-05-10
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-14 20:11:06
Message Quote Reply   #14
 
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Quote:

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)


Good story.....


thank you
 
 
 
   
 
 
Nikflickz   0    Member   
Citizen
24
Title Citizen
Level 2
Exp 24
Points 0
Gold 24
Reg 2009-10-01
From
Posts 1
Visits 22
Last Login 2010-05-10
Status Offline
   
  Written at 2009-10-14 20:14:31
Message Quote Reply   #15
 
 

Re: A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Quote:

Re:A Journey to a New World (My TO Essay)

Good job, this is a nice story and that’s all of us like in game.


thanks gm

im so happy
 
 
 
   
 
 
Previous   1 2   Next